100 word count

Aloha guys, This week we did a 100 word count for reading. A 100 word count is when you  get a prompt or a photo and you have to write about it by the photo or if it is a prompt you have to add that in your story, and you also have to make your story 100 words exactly. This week we had to add a prompt into out story. Here is my 100 word count and the prompt.

…’ What did I tell you about the lights?’

It was a stormy night, heaps of car crashes and deaths last week. I was driving slowly down my street as I was coming back from the shop. Headlights flash behind me whilst blinding me, they follow me near my house. I rang my friend and said that someone was following me. I tried speeding away.’ What did I tell you about the lights?’ my friend said. “ I forgot?” i mumbled “Omg ur so dumb you stupid rat” my ugly fat friend yelled at me “ugh be quite smelly fat rat”

Poems

 Aloha, this week for writing we have been doing poems. The last week we have done two poems and they both had to be about a flower. The two types of poems we have been doing ar called, cinquain poem, and a haiku poem. We first started doing thwe cinquain poem and then did the haiku. When we had finshed our cinquain poems we went on to doing the haiku. If we did a flower in the cinquain we couldn't do the same in the haiku. we had to do two poems each. The flowers I did for the cinquain were, Jasmine flower and a blossom tree. For the haiku I did three poems and the flowers I did for that were, pinelands princess dahlilah, hibiscus and a forget me not flower.  Here are my poems and what a haiku and cinquain is.

          cinquain

         haiku 

Tree House

 Aloha guys The last couple of week our class room had been working on describe writing. We had to Inclue all 5 senses, They were see, taste,feel, smell and hear. Our teacher set a photo, and we had to write about the photo. We had to atleast have 3-4 paragharphs. We had to also add some simmlies. Here is the photo we had to write about, and my writing.......

Glistening leaves shine in the distant horizon, as the spider webs shimmer in the gentle breeze. Trees twist around me as I look left and right, Green surrounds  me as I stroll towards my old treehouse.  

 

Sounds of  old rotting leaves crunch as I walk on the damp brown dirt. Twigs snap as I brush past them and little insects scuttle away. Birds singing sweetly high above me as I glance up toward the sparky, blue sky.  Small, brown branches cracking sounds like a dying elephant,

The fireplace steams up hot air, filling the treehouse like a sauna. Rays of warm sunlight beams through the tiny old windows and onto my silky brown hair. Outside droplets of water trickle down the leafy green undergrowth and onto the forest floor below.

Tiny specks of dry dirt flew up in the gentle breeze and into my mouth, it tasted like moldy bread. Crisp air dried up my mouth, like me eating a family size pack of chips, without drinking any water.

 Gross moss filled my nostrils,  the scent of the colorful flowers wafes through the air, It smells like i was in a fairytale that is filled with flowers.

Desribe it

Aloha guys The last couple of week our class room had been working on describe writing. We had to Inclue all 5 senses, They were see, taste,feel, smell and hear. Our teacher set a photo, and we had to write about the photo. We had to atleast have 3-4 paragharphs. We had to also add some simmlies. Here is the photo we had to write about, and my writing.......

The dazzling hot sun reflects from the crystal clear chilly water. Water splashes down from the bright orange slide. Kids are  leaping up and down, falling off parents backs and splashing around in the cool water. A maze of brightly coloured slides blinds my eyes, it reminds me of a selection of fluorescent highlighters.

Palm trees are scattered around, giving shade from the burning hot sun. The sun is beating down onto my sunburnt cheeks, it feels like vinegar getting into a cut. The steam from the hot pool makes me as red as a tomato.

Laughs echo through the colourful tunnels as people zoom through. People splashing into the water sounds like crashing waves at the beach. Sizzles from the hotdogs cooking makes my ears pop like popcorn.

Sweet slimy maple syrup from my delicious pancakes drips down to my chin and onto my hot feet.The soft pancakes slide down my throat, its tasty like a dream come true. My cold, smooth coconut water fills my stomach up.

A  delicious  aroma of bbq wafts through the thin air. The smell of chlorine tickles my nostrils. Sweet sticky ice cream scents float through the air.

Persuasive writing

Aloha guys we have been learning how to write persuasive writing. Persuasive writing is, whats states the issue or topic, states what you think about it and why people should believe you. We had to pick between the options of positive or negative. Our thing we had to write about was "It better to be and only child." we had to to a brainstorm about why we think being an only child is a positive idea, and why we think being an only child is a negative idea. Then we had to chose three of the things we put in the brainstorm and write our arguments.

Here is my persuasive writing.

Being an only child is the best thing ever.  There are many good reasons for being an only child. My first reason is that It is cheaper for your parents so you can get more things.  Second reason is that you get to do what you want.  Last reason is that you also get your own room .

Saving money is great because you get more expensive things and more things that you want. Life won't be as expensive for you and your parents. You can get nicer things and  you get to go on more fun activities and holidays.

Getting your own room is so great. If you have your own room then it won't be crowded and messy. You have more room to put stuff and won't wake up from people snoring.Also you get more privacy and can invite friends without getting annoyed at siblings.

Getting to do what you want is so good, because you don't have to worry about your siblings coming with you. You will get more money to go get stuff, and you won't get embarrassed. You’ll be much happier without your siblings and if you are the oldest you won't have to worry about your younger siblings.

I strongly agree that being an only child would be good. Its is cheaper for parents, you can do what you want,  and you get your own room.

Describe it

Aloha guys, this week we have been learning how to describe photo prompts. We first had to make some what describe writing is.  Descriptive writing is when you DESCRIBE a photo, it is NOT a story.We then had to start writing.  Here is the what describe writing is, photo prompt and my writing . This is also my favorite piece of writing i have writte

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Narrative

 Aloha guys. This term we have been writing narratives. Narratives is when you have to make up a story and add a introduction, a problem, a resolution and a ending. We had a photo and had to do a narrative about it. The photo we had to write about was a girl in a dark scary tunnel.  Here is the photo we had to write about and my story.