Aloha guys The last couple of week our class room had been working on describe writing. We had to Inclue all 5 senses, They were see, taste,feel, smell and hear. Our teacher set a photo, and we had to write about the photo. We had to atleast have 3-4 paragharphs. We had to also add some simmlies. Here is the photo we had to write about, and my writing.......
Sounds of old rotting leaves crunch as I walk on the damp brown dirt. Twigs snap as I brush past them and little insects scuttle away. Birds singing sweetly high above me as I glance up toward the sparky, blue sky. Small, brown branches cracking sounds like a dying elephant,
The fireplace steams up hot air, filling the treehouse like a sauna. Rays of warm sunlight beams through the tiny old windows and onto my silky brown hair. Outside droplets of water trickle down the leafy green undergrowth and onto the forest floor below.
Tiny specks of dry dirt flew up in the gentle breeze and into my mouth, it tasted like moldy bread. Crisp air dried up my mouth, like me eating a family size pack of chips, without drinking any water.
Gross moss filled my nostrils, the scent of the colorful flowers wafes through the air, It smells like i was in a fairytale that is filled with flowers.
Ni Hao Kelis,
ReplyDeleteIt's Krystallynna here. Thank you for sharing your amazing work with is. I liked it when you said Glistening leaves shine in the distant horizon, as the spider webs shimmer in the gentle breeze. It was really describing the sunlight and the spider webs. Quick question. Do you have a treehouse? Bye now!
~Krystallynna