Desribe it

Aloha guys The last couple of week our class room had been working on describe writing. We had to Inclue all 5 senses, They were see, taste,feel, smell and hear. Our teacher set a photo, and we had to write about the photo. We had to atleast have 3-4 paragharphs. We had to also add some simmlies. Here is the photo we had to write about, and my writing.......

The dazzling hot sun reflects from the crystal clear chilly water. Water splashes down from the bright orange slide. Kids are  leaping up and down, falling off parents backs and splashing around in the cool water. A maze of brightly coloured slides blinds my eyes, it reminds me of a selection of fluorescent highlighters.

Palm trees are scattered around, giving shade from the burning hot sun. The sun is beating down onto my sunburnt cheeks, it feels like vinegar getting into a cut. The steam from the hot pool makes me as red as a tomato.

Laughs echo through the colourful tunnels as people zoom through. People splashing into the water sounds like crashing waves at the beach. Sizzles from the hotdogs cooking makes my ears pop like popcorn.

Sweet slimy maple syrup from my delicious pancakes drips down to my chin and onto my hot feet.The soft pancakes slide down my throat, its tasty like a dream come true. My cold, smooth coconut water fills my stomach up.

A  delicious  aroma of bbq wafts through the thin air. The smell of chlorine tickles my nostrils. Sweet sticky ice cream scents float through the air.