Aloha guys. This term we have been writing narratives. Narratives is when you have to make up a story and add a introduction, a problem, a resolution and a ending. We had a photo and had to do a narrative about it. The photo we had to write about was a girl in a dark scary tunnel. Here is the photo we had to write about and my story.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Friday, September 11, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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WOW Kelis.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this.You've used lots of adjectives which made it more exciting to read.The children are learning to use WOW words in room 3.Your words gave me a picture in my head which made me feel like I was there as things were happening.