Persuasive writing

Aloha guys we have been learning how to write persuasive writing. Persuasive writing is, whats states the issue or topic, states what you think about it and why people should believe you. We had to pick between the options of positive or negative. Our thing we had to write about was "It better to be and only child." we had to to a brainstorm about why we think being an only child is a positive idea, and why we think being an only child is a negative idea. Then we had to chose three of the things we put in the brainstorm and write our arguments.

Here is my persuasive writing.

Being an only child is the best thing ever.  There are many good reasons for being an only child. My first reason is that It is cheaper for your parents so you can get more things.  Second reason is that you get to do what you want.  Last reason is that you also get your own room .

Saving money is great because you get more expensive things and more things that you want. Life won't be as expensive for you and your parents. You can get nicer things and  you get to go on more fun activities and holidays.

Getting your own room is so great. If you have your own room then it won't be crowded and messy. You have more room to put stuff and won't wake up from people snoring.Also you get more privacy and can invite friends without getting annoyed at siblings.

Getting to do what you want is so good, because you don't have to worry about your siblings coming with you. You will get more money to go get stuff, and you won't get embarrassed. You’ll be much happier without your siblings and if you are the oldest you won't have to worry about your younger siblings.

I strongly agree that being an only child would be good. Its is cheaper for parents, you can do what you want,  and you get your own room.