Kia Ora guys, today we had to make another step by step thing. but today we had to write it about " how to make pancakes." There were alot of instructions. Here is mine
I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Thursday, May 14, 2020
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Kelis, I like the way you are specific about how long to cook the first side of your pancake. In a lot of your steps you have started with the word 'then' do you think the instructions would make sense if you left it out?
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