kia ora, Today we had to write another step by step. today we had to make it about " how to make a ham and cheese sandwich. here is mine
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Tuesday, May 12, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Kelis, you have really clear instructions here. You have said that you need butter but do not mention butter in your instructions. Have you missed a step or are you having a sandwich without butter?
ReplyDeleteHi Miss Scott thanks for saying that my instructions where really clear. I don't like butter in my sandwiches. do you like butter in your sandwiches??
DeleteSome day I put butter in my sandwiches but other days I don't. It depends on the day. Maybe you could put a step in that says people could butter their bread if they wished to.
DeleteGood evening Kelis. Good work with the ham and cheese sandwich instructions. I especially like the last step which tells you to eat the sandwich, very important. I love butter in my sandwiches but both of my children won't have it.
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