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Friday, July 9, 2021

100 word count

 Aloha people, This week we did a 100 word count for reading. A 100 word count is when you  get a prompt or a photo and you have to write about it by the photo or if it is a prompt you have to add that in your story, and you also have to make your story 100 words exactly. This week we had to add the prompt in. The prompt was " I just had to see what was inside" Here is my 100 word count.


My nana died, my whole family flew down from Aussie. Everyone was crying. My fat fat uncle, my green aunty and my purple elephant started digging the hole where you put the coffin.  “Mhm” John Cena cleared his throat. “ I have an announcement to make, your nana has not died,” John Cena announced, “ OO” everyone gasped. “What's in the coffin then?” I mumbled.  I opened up the coffin, because I just had to see what was inside. I gasped, there was a dead crocodile inside the coffin. Everyone yelled “ WHY YOU DO THAT FOR, WE DIDN'T NEED A SPECIAL CELEBRATION”



1 comment:

  1. So who gets to tell the croc's family that he is no longer with us Kelis?.
    Instead of burying the croc maybe you just just turn it into a hand bag or a pair of boots.

    I've never seen a purple elephant before.Do they look the same as the ones that have yellow stripes and orange dots?.I've seen lots of them.
    They hang out in my back garden with the fluffy pink flamingos and blue footed ducks.

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