camera action

Kia ora guys,

This week we have been learning about narrative writing. We had to write a narrative story using a photo. The photo was of a man taking a photo of something inside of a car. We had to write about orientation, a problem, a solution and a ending.  Here is the photo we had to write about and my story

My name is Jonny, I'm a 21 year old boy who lives in London in a big house. I'm a secret agent whose job is  to take photos of people and other stuff. I give my photos to my boss and then he gives me all the money I earn. I love my job.

The camera flashed in my eyes as I  took a photo. I wound up my window and parked outside the secret basement underneath the wooden plank. I went inside and my money was waiting for me on top of the white table.

I was walking outside to take some more photos and there was a slippery banana peel outside the door. I was running so fast with my camera in my hand and slipped on the banana peel. I dropped my camera. It was crumbled in tiny ,tiny pieces. I was so shocked because I didn't have enough money to buy a new one and all my memories would be gone. 

So many people were looking at me and laughing because I slipped on the banana peel. I ran away to my car but so many people were taking photos of me driving away to my boss to tell him that I slipped on  a banana peel and broke my camera. He was so angry that he almost fired me from my job. I went back to my house and went to sleep. The next day I went back to my boss and he gave me another camera but he said I wouldn't get any pay for 2 weeks, because he spent all my pay money on the camera.

I had to sell my house because I didn't have any money. I asked my mom if I could live with her and she said “ why?”  I said “ because I slipped on a banana peel and broke my camera, my boss had to spend my pay money on a new camera for me and I had to sell my house for more money.” my mom said “ ok FINE.”

I took off to my boss and told him that I sold my house for more money. He said “cool”

Kelis is signing out.