We had to write about marshmallow monster. We had to make a story bored then make a table in a doc and do the story bored in the table.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Miss Scott. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful in your comments.
Wednesday, October 23, 2019
Descriptive writing
We had to write about marshmallow monster. We had to make a story bored then make a table in a doc and do the story bored in the table.
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Fantastic use of adjectives and vivid verbs. Well done Kelis.
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