Thursday, May 14, 2020
Pancakes
Kia Ora guys, today we had to make another step by step thing. but today we had to write it about " how to make pancakes." There were alot of instructions. Here is mine
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Hi Kelis, I like the way you are specific about how long to cook the first side of your pancake. In a lot of your steps you have started with the word 'then' do you think the instructions would make sense if you left it out?
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